I was handed a copy of your paper this morning on the university campus where I study. I liked the format and appreciate the notification of problems within the world. However, I think it lacks two elements:
1) Love.
2) An appreciation of the Jainist proposition that there are many faces of Truth that need to be examined before a story can change the world.
Most Respectfully,
Gene Chapman, CEO
Mahatma Gandhi Global Library and Book Exchange